Friday, 1 September 2017

Attempt at a related renku - not as easy as I thought - with Su Wai Hlaing

bird droppings

on the window sill

but no cat


food scattered on the table

no sign of a mouse


TV programme

children laughing

Tom and Jerry


last night's comedy show 

audience with laughing mouths


koi fish

gaping for food 

watched by a frog


little tadpoles paddle

following the mother fish


the flotilla

sails to sea

windows wave farewell

1 comment:

demolition the musty smell of an old house