the garden
goes to bed
under a blanket of snow
Suggested revision by Su Wai Hlaing;
the garden
goes to bed
snow-blanket
Here I record my own efforts at haiku, senryu and other short form poetry. I also provide a resources page and other comment on haiku. You can find some of my published haiku on the Living Haiku Anthology (https://preview.tinyurl.com/y88hqva7) and the Haiku Foundation Haiku Registry (https://preview.tinyurl.com/y9p2ahnl) - Roger Watson
sibilant whispers the sea swells into stormy waters
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