Tuesday 31 December 2019

speaking Elvish
to the Dwarf King
Tolkein's phrasebook
through
Georgia O'Keefe's skull
the desert

Comment by Fay Aoyagi:
The last line is too close to the rest.   

Georgia O'Keefe's skull
I miss the warmth
of my old cat


Well...   I know this is not what you intend to write.    I tried to come up with a feeling of 'desert' or its withered feeling...   :<
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My revisions:

through
          Georgia
                     O'Keefe's
                                   skull
                                          infinity...
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Georgia O'Keefe's skull
staring up
at vapour trails


through the confessional screen
the priest's breath

Published (2020) Prune Juice Issue 30  
the silent roar of the waterfall

fried mushroom cloud cuckoo clock face time
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stormy sea shore line up

battle axe head strong desire
Found haiku:

summer is fading
the leaves fall in ones and twos

From 'Afternoon' by Philip Larkin (2003) Collected Poems Faber, London page 115

On shallow slates the pigeons shift together

From ‘Pigeons’ by Philip Larkin (2003) Collected Poems Faber, London page 178

Monday 23 December 2019

Chinese characters
lost
in calligraphic thoughts

new ink bottle
waiting
for the words to come
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empty ink bottle
no time left
to finish my story

Friday 20 December 2019

late bottled vintage
just reflecting
burial or cremation

Published (2020) Poetry Pea Series 3 Episode 12: Ageing
Published (2020) The Poetry Pea Journal of haiku and senryu Summer page 49

taking longer
to reach the creaking step
my old dad

Published (2020) Blithe Spirit Volume 24 Number 5 page 42

Thursday 12 December 2019

Wednesday 11 December 2019

The dung heap quartet

fresh morning air
a light frosting
on the dung heap
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a change in the weather
wisps of steam rising
from the dung heap
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midsummer day
the hum of bluebottles
in the dung heap
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the days get shorter
falling silent
the dung heap

Monday 9 December 2019

Tuesday 3 December 2019

The uninhibited joy of the Chinese working class

line dancing
flute playing
dancing in formation
the public park trademark
of this unique nation

old men with caged birds
hanging in trees
children with grandmas
ready to please

slow joggers
limb smackers
backwards walkers
rice crackers

hacking and spitting
great gobbets of phlegm
no one seems to bother
they do it again

mobile phones
another selfie
too much smoking
never healthy

public toilets
easy to find
an awful stink
no one seems to mind

line dancing
flute playing
dancing in formation
the public park trademark
of this unique nation

two birds singing
a songbird
to a jailbird

a goods train
rumbling past
precisely reflecting my mood

Monday 2 December 2019

magnolia blossom against a grey sky mixed feelings