Saturday 29 September 2018

fortune teller
my money
for his thoughts

****
fortune teller
my money
for his fortune
(suggested by Su Wai Hlaing)

conker season

children

with bags full of hope

Thursday 27 September 2018

Wednesday 26 September 2018

corrugated church
dilapidated
still letting in the light


Reworked:

dilapidated
corrugated church
still letting in the light

Friday 21 September 2018

Wednesday 19 September 2018

Tuesday 18 September 2018

final resting place
squashed between pages
a dead fly
****
a dead fly
squashed between pages...
but who closed to book?
****
scraping a dead fly*
from the old book
I read on

Published (2018)  ephemerae Volume1, C, page 50

LHA Ref:
ephemerae 1.C, December 2018

* at the suggestion of Shrikaanth Krishnamurthy the original first line was changed from:
'scraping the dead fly'*

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chestnut trees
in the damp grass
the smell of conkers

accepting the editor’s decision

my haiku

rejected

Monday 17 September 2018

Friday 14 September 2018

optician's bill
unable to read
the small print

Published cattails April 2019 page 39

Editor's choice:

What if the first line had been: grocer’s bill? The result would have been a very mundane poem not worth committing to memory. But put ‘optician’s bill’ instead and the irony hits you in the eye. Yet another senryu where juxtaposing two apparently unrelated images results in a whole which is funnier than the sum total of the parts.

Gautam Nadkarni

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licking
the envelope
I seal my fate

(surely this one can't be original!)
knowing only
where she's been
a snail

Thursday 13 September 2018

Saturday 8 September 2018

antique shop
the smell
of opportunity

Published (2018) ephemerae Volume1, C, page 50

LHA Ref:
ephemerae 1.C, December 2018

Published (2019) All the way home: aging in haiku page 295

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Thursday 6 September 2018

the crisp packet
opening
on a silent train
my thoughts turn
to murder

Sunday 2 September 2018

an unfortunate worm in the mouth of the early morning blackbird